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Fiction for Nemesis

 Post subject: Fiction for Nemesis
PostPosted: Fri Feb 11, 2011 2:35 pm 
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Impressed by Chroma's idea, I've been toying with the idea of including fiction in Epic:Nemesis

Here's my first crack at it. Hope you like it. Criticism and tips welcome of course :)

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 Post subject: Re: Fiction for Nemesis
PostPosted: Fri Feb 11, 2011 3:17 pm 
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Not bad, not bad at all! Which armies will be featured in Nemesis?

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 Post subject: Re: Fiction for Nemesis
PostPosted: Fri Feb 11, 2011 3:21 pm 
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Space Wolves & Thousand Sons.

There was some talk that several other "nemesis" type armies could be featured but I don't know if that's happening.

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 Post subject: Re: Fiction for Nemesis
PostPosted: Fri Feb 11, 2011 3:35 pm 
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What about Dark Angels vs Space Wolves, Tyranids vs Squats, Genestealer Cult vs GW design team, fluff vs game balance, common sense vs World economy ?

Son, I am disapoint.


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 Post subject: Re: Fiction for Nemesis
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Dobbsy, I PM'd you some thoughts on the fiction. In general I like the feel of it. The one thing I can say is Nemesis shouldn't feel constrained by the format of the other four supplements; i.e. writing with no dialogue, overview perspective, etc. I like the idea of there being all these short stories for each pairing, and I believe you can get away with different formats for all of them if you wanted.

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 Post subject: Re: Fiction for Nemesis
PostPosted: Fri Feb 11, 2011 11:59 pm 
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Athmospheric wrote:
What about Dark Angels vs Space Wolves, Tyranids vs Squats, Genestealer Cult vs GW design team, fluff vs game balance, common sense vs World economy ?

Son, I am disapoint.

Not sure if you're being humorous here or not, but don't be disappointed :) If the various "army champs" get together and put those Nemesis supplements together then that'll be cool. Can't say I'd put Space Wolves with Dark Angels in any hurry though as the SW list will already be in this supplement. :)

If there is going to be multiple Nemesis supplements though, this one may need a name change.e.g Epic: Fury - Nemesis Project vol.1 etc etc.

Mosc - I agree. The idea I have is to have different styles/stories of one page fiction between sections of the supplement to give a bit more feel and interest to the book so it's useful for more than just gaming. This one was meant to be slightly confusing to the reader as it's done from the POV of a confused protagonist.


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 Post subject: Re: Fiction for Nemesis
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I was humorous (or at least trying to ::) ) but certainly not sarcastic ! I love the nemesis concept.

I haven't find time to read your fiction yet tho, so no serious comments for now.


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