The two most important things for me:• The type is too small. I don’t care if it is 6pt or 5.5pt, it is too small. It does not need to be this small, there is plenty of space.
• The type is negatively tracked in the pdf. I have shown this in the other thread, it is the same in the new pdf. I don’t care how or why it got there but it is unnecessary, harms the readability of the text and should go.
If for some unimaginable reason the type must be this small, change the typeface. I know GW used Garamond, but they did not put it through such abuse (5.5pt negative tracked), use a typeface with enhanced legibility at small sizes.
Other stuff• Headers should be placed consistently and not swap between landscape and portrait.
• Page numbers are missing from landscape pages – why care? Because the pdf document page numbers do not match the page numbers in the index, so when i navigate via page number i NEED to be able to compare document page number to pdf page number.
• Formatting of bullet points is inconsistent, compare pdf p3 to p4.
• Multiplication signs and dashes, if you don’t mind i’m happy with that, but at least be consistent
• Contents page could be prodded a bit, but it's the least of the document's troubles currently.
• 1 document or split? Personally I’d split by race
and have a mega-compendium, make both available, no big deal and everyone is happy, seems a non-issue given you can split the electronic doc up and repack at no cost.
Is this document designed for print or screen? Are you envisaging people just printing off odd pages on draft, or spending many monies getting it full colour laser printed and bound? Im afraid the answer is probably yes to everything.
Landscape pages for references primarily bother me if many people will print and bind this document, as they will have to swivel it around every other page. In all other outcomes it is less of an issue.
I am probably* happy to poke the document for some formatting if needed if it is available in a .doc/.docx/.rtf etc compatible format or InDesign.
* disclaimer in-case none of it uses styles etc