OK, Critical mode engaged once more:
Love the double cockpit -very nicely done. And overall I think this flows far better than the scorprion turret did.
I cant really see it in these photos, but The revenant torso looks as though its mounting might be a bit flimsy for the weight of structure above - is there much of a connection there?
I think on someting this size, the strapping could do with somethign added to it. Maybe sculpt or ccavenge a spirit stone from somethere to break up the large straps a little. Alternatively its another chance to show off your brushwork on an open space and I'll know to shut up in future
The more I look at them as well, the more I begin to think the rear one looks like it could slip off up the tail - is there a connecting strap under its belly front-to-back? Could there be?
These are all really really minor things. It looks far better to my eye than the scorpion & looks like it will fit well with the force.
Finally, and yes, this will end all my posts since I now know you live nearby - Bring them to guildford!!
