A few thoughts:
P7
day 28, remove tab from start of first para
p8 top of page, another rouge tab
dont seem to be tabs look more like a first line indent? still seems inconsistent.
p9 in text box
The First Assault  your using an em dash for the 973rd's  losses and a hyphen for the rebel forces.
*edit, on following pages rebel forces also have a hyphen not an em
use of hyphens and dashes throughout is a bit varied, seem to be using ems (without space) in section headings and ens  in sub headings?
p15 image captions, caption for infantry bases is left aligned (rest are centered)
p18 image captions, insufficient space between right side of caption and the pics
p19, should third war for Armageddon be capitalized? eg Third War, World War 2
p20 how to on trenchworks, captions have an odd first line indent not found elsewhere.  trenchworks should be hyphenated?
p24 and unit cards in general, too little guttering for justified text, especially with it siting on a baseline gird it can read as one column - for example see fire support last lines, your gutter space is less than some of the word spaces.
Consider increasing spacing between unit entires, currently the unit's heading is closer to to info table for the previous unit than the text for the unit it relates to.
P25, notes for thunderer, insert a space after the :
p29 image caption, change caption alignment, currently starts a few mm in and ends a few mm past the image.
p30 trojan has a blue border (assuming this is deliberate?)
p37  wrong font for captions
p40 wrong font in sup com's table
p41 wrong font for infantry table
p42 wrong font for engineers..this look to be the same for first unit table on each page
p48 wrong font for section title
p51 R HQ company , looks like you've condensed the font but kept the letter-spacing/tracking the same, tighten up the tracking on the condensed font (or just line break, looks a bit odd as it is anyway)
p52 top of second column, tidy up the orphan
other overall comments:
Throughout your using an 'x' (eg the letter) not a multiplication sign.
Throughout the font used for page numbers look like its changing between a serif and a sans at times.
Look at spacing between text and image boxes, often rather close. possibly look at your paragraph spacing and spacing in general as regards the use of your baseline grid, as your use of space is often out of kilter with the hierarchy and relationship of headings/info etc.
You really like the em dash? ÂÂ
