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PostPosted: Mon Aug 10, 2009 4:55 pm 
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I have finally finished writing rules and background for the final test version of my Titan game "Adeptus Titanicus: Legio".
I am not a native English Speaker and thus need some of you guys who are to proofread what I wrote (it's in English of course).

It's a word document (.doc) of 71 pages containing background and rules. The only part that is missing is the short story that will be spread over the rules part (it's not finished yet).

If you volunteer, post in this thread and send me you email address via PM. I will then send the file to all with a single mail.

When reading, please insert comments in the file with red font colour. You can then send the file back to me. All comments are welcome.

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 10, 2009 6:31 pm 
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I'd be glad to proofread it. PM'd


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PostPosted: Tue Aug 11, 2009 5:51 pm 
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ahh go on.

I can't promise when I'll have finished it though.

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 11, 2009 7:45 pm 
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I'd be happy to help


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PostPosted: Tue Aug 11, 2009 9:37 pm 
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Quote: (Carrington @ 11 Aug. 2009, 20:45 )

I'd be happy to help

Then send me a PM with your email address. :smile:

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 11, 2009 11:54 pm 
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PM sent.

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 3:35 pm 
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Ok, sent the file to all who offered help.

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 12, 2009 8:37 pm 
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I have sent you a mail asking if you have finished proofreading.

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 30, 2009 7:28 pm 
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It's quite unfortunate that I still have not received any feedback from you guys who contacted me in or because of this thread.

As I think my English is good enough I decided now to use the text without such proofreading, although it would certainly have improved it.

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I'm willing to proofread, if you still want help.

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 05, 2009 2:04 am 
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Quote: (redsimon @ Sep. 30 2009, 19:28 )

It's quite unfortunate that I still have not received any feedback from you guys who contacted me in or because of this thread.

As I think my English is good enough I decided now to use the text without such proofreading, although it would certainly have improved it.

Guitlt tists in the gut.

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