It's been a little while, so my comments are "starting fresh". As always. I mean for them to be constructive and ignore anything as you like

- Why do the Drop Troops have to deploy in the enemy half of the field? This seems to be an unnecessary restriction. I'd just say they all have to Deep Strike in the first compulsory move.
- Do you have to make the second wave a mandatory choice? I doubt I'll ever have enough Valkyries to make this but I would like to make an Elysian army (to use all my extra EW Guild Assault troops). I'm sure the same would apply to others. How about "If you wish to use a second wave you must buy an infantry....etc". Oh, and "fastly" should probably be "quickly".
- Heavy - I can live with the -2 TSM, but you need to change the weapon name. As best I can tell you don't actually use the Rocket Teams anywhere, so I'd call the Heavy weapon a Rocket Launcher, or make something up...Kinetic Penetrator, Squeeze Gun, Hvy Recoiless...but not Heavy Bolter.
- You dont have a card for Rocket teams (see above)
- Lance Corporal/Corporal Lance. Name changes around, and I dont think it is a good name choice anyway. I'd call them Sappers or Field Engineers or Demolition Teams.
- Veterans. Similar to above. Call them Special Forces or Commandos. Veterans just implies Elite and maybe a better Morale to me, not a bunch of extra abilities.
That's it from a quick read
