- OK maybe just mention those three characters by name then, to avoid the ambiguity about what a leader is.
- In general I suggest sorting out the nomenclature, since "Harlequin" seems to be used to mean several different things - the Harlequin unit, any unit with the Harlequin special rule, and formations in the Harlequin army list. For example I am unsure what the restrictions in this sentence mean:
"The Great Harlequin character may only be taken as the Supreme Commander of a Harlequins Grand Masque army, where the number of Harlequin formations is greater than other Eldar formations. You may add the Great Harlequin Character to
any Harlequin stand."
So do I need more Harlequin Troupes*, or more formations that contain units with the Harlequin ability (which is the same as saying more formations selected from the Harlequin list)? Likewise can the Great Harlequin go in a mime unit, which has the Harlequin ability in its datasheet? Or just a Harlequin unit?
* Of course by Harlequin Troupe above I mean the Troupe formation, which is a warhost and not a troupe, rather than the harlequin troupes, which do not contain harlequins and are actual troupes. Clear? No, didn't think so

Basically I found the terminology quite perplexing.
- Likewise the "partially within" on the laughing god, best to be explicit in the list.
- does the +1 initiative for the laughing god apply to formations coming out of the webway (assuming the webway is within 30)? and i suppose the question is equally valid for the -1.
- I don't understand your point 5?
- Transport: so there can't be any spare spaces, which means I cannot take 3 wave serpents, it would have to be 2 serpents and a falcon? I guess you don't mean this since it would mean you could only ever take 2 barges of pleasure if you had taken an infantry upgrade like the solitaire? Maybe you mean to prevent taking extra empty transports?
- OK, the armour: why are they harder to kill when hit than a space marine, and macro weapons don't kill them etc? It just looks odd for the entire army to have 5+ reinforced and lots of invulnerable saves. A harlequin jetbike is twice as hard as an eldar jetbike? Really?
- The characters/upgrades are silly but of course very expensive. Not sure what's going on with the harlequins, how come they are are more expensive than the mimes? i get one is a host but it just seems backwards. likewise the troupe leader is the same price as the master mime, which is just all around much better.