This bit doesn't look quite right:
Quote:
Raptors 175pts
One IW Lord Character and four Raptors
Upgrades Raptors
Dreadnoughts
Siegehammer Company 275pts
1 IW Lord Character upgrade, 6 IW Assault Marines and 3 Rhinos
Chosen
Four Chaos Marine Chosen Units 125pts
Looking at that bit quoted there, was there meant to be any upgrade options for the Siegehammer unit? And is the word "Dreadnoughts" meant to be attached to anything? Like a formation of Dreads or something?
Other stuff:
On the Ordinatus, it could retain the same profile, but with just a rename of the main weapon. Same profile, but suitably siege-y Iron-Warrior-y gun name. "Annihilator Cannon" might be a good start.
I'm quite liking the recurring theme of Ignore Cover weapons. I was thinking recently of what I'd do with this list if I was to have a pop at it, and that's a thought that crossed my mind as a nasty thing to do to people.
I'm liking the demonic artillery based on the Contagion engines. Would question the cost of 350 for 3 compared to 325 for 4 Contagions though, when the artillery gain Ignore Cover, a 4+ save instead of 5+, and the 1+ initiative instead of 2+, in exchange for losing Indirect Fire, Disrupt, and the second, 30cm Ignore Cover, Vomit Cannon shot. I like the profile, including the no Indirect, but maybe 4 would be a better number in the formation for the points. Especially as they can't be hidden away behind cover without Indirect and with 3 in the formation, 1 kill breaks them.
I was going to question why the Siege Dreads are that expensive, but the 3+ and the Reinforced answer that completely. Ouch.
No love for a cultist cannon-fodder option?
I'd better go think of a good Siege Dreadnought and Ordinatus conversion...