Quote: (GlynG @ 07 May 2009, 14:20 )
Why rename the Ringleaders to be called Preachers?
Ringleaders was much more appropriate, or else something along those sorts of lines - Party Representatives, Delegates, Electioneers, Spokesmen, Ballotsmen, etc. Having them inspiring and leaders but not fearless sounds more appropriate backgroundwise and makes the list more distinctive from the Siegers, not sure on list balance-wise.
The background didn't make complete sense before.
There was a rebellion for all the right reasons (Democracy, ultimately loyalty, etc), and somehow a bunch of gangsters take all the best weapons for themselves?
Why were the Gangsters inspiring to the men? Why were they 'leaders'?
I think I even used the word 'ruffians' in describing them!
In order to make the character more fitting to the Mossinian background, they're now a bit more fitting (If a bit more cliche'd too).
If the list is proving as contentious as it sounds then, as much as I would like to see it in print, I really think delaying publication a while longer till things are more thoroughly balanced, tried out and tested would be the best idea.