I don't know the game well enough for rules suggestions, but on the general editing front:
Is there a reason to have the Warp Hunter and Lynx capitalised on the reference sheet? It looks out of place. To be extra picky, the Howling Banshee's 'infiltrate' seems oddly spaced out.
Again in the reference sheet- is there a reason why the Titan Pulsar on the Phantom has very different stats to the Titan Pulsar of the Warlock? If the stats are going to be different the names should be too.
On with the list:
The Aspect Warrior Warhost states that it is 4 units strong- I'm pretty sure this should be 8. Also for the Aspects, it should be stated that 2 Exarchs can be taken for +25pts
each. This may not be clear to any newbies, especially as many other things are costed as groups (such as the Guardian's '+4 Wave serpents for 200pts').
With the Guardians, it should also be made clear that swapping Guardians for Heavy Weapon Platforms is free (you can never have too much clarity). It's also not clear what you mean by 'Guardians, Heavy weapon platforms and Farseers only' for the Wave Serpent upgrade. I know the intention is that the upgrade can only be taken if those are the only other models in the formation, but If I came across this list with no prior knowledge I'd just be confused by that.
Out of curiosity, why can't Wraithguard be taken in Wave serpents in this list? Is it honestly too powerful, or just to help distinguish them from the Iyanden list?
That all that's popped out at me so far, hope it's more useful than annoying