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Author:  Evil and Chaos [ Mon Sep 19, 2011 12:10 pm ]
Post subject:  Adeptus Mechanicus vs Orks supplement story preview
Hey All,

I'm done with my break from the forum, and I'm returning with a few fruits of labour...

For starters, anyone who wants to help me out with the proof reading of the story segment of the still-unnamed Adeptus Mechanicus vs Orks supplement can now download the first chunk of the story attached below.

Please PM me any feedback, especially as related to typos etc, although critiques of the story itself are of course also welcome.

Bear in mind it is intended to be read as a two page spread, ala how a real printed book would be read.

Please note that all graphics & artwork currently included are temporary placeholders, I hope to replace them with better pictures, maps, etc, further down the line.

Anybody who would like to contribute Artwork, or Writing to the project, please also PM me.

Thanks,

- E&C

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Author:  Apocolocyntosis [ Mon Sep 19, 2011 12:14 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Adeptus Mechanicus vs Orks supplement story preview
will have a skim through over lunch, my en-dash sense is tingling :)
Author:  Dobbsy [ Mon Sep 19, 2011 1:44 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Adeptus Mechanicus vs Orks supplement story preview
PM sent
Author:  wargame_insomniac [ Mon Sep 19, 2011 7:33 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Adeptus Mechanicus vs Orks supplement story preview
Hi Ben- have dowloaded and will have a full read through.

One quick question- can you lighten the brown on planetary survey page. maybe my eyes are tired but I'm finidibg it hard to read on screen. Also I reckon it will be wuite dark when you print off.

Thanks

James
Author:  wargame_insomniac [ Mon Sep 19, 2011 7:38 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Adeptus Mechanicus vs Orks supplement story preview
Mega Dreadnaughts??
Author:  Angel_of_Caliban [ Mon Sep 19, 2011 7:49 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Adeptus Mechanicus vs Orks supplement story preview
wargame_insomniac wrote:
Mega Dreadnaughts??

http://www.forgeworld.co.uk/Warhammer-40000/ORK-MEGA-DREAD.html

Mega Dreadnought............ ;D
Author:  BlackLegion [ Mon Sep 19, 2011 7:50 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Adeptus Mechanicus vs Orks supplement story preview
For the titl.e:
Epic: Godmachines
Epic: Storm of Steel
Epic: Steelstorm
Epic: Green Tide
Author:  Angel_of_Caliban [ Mon Sep 19, 2011 8:09 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Adeptus Mechanicus vs Orks supplement story preview
BlackLegion wrote:
For the titl.e:
Epic: Godmachines
Epic: Storm of Steel
Epic: Steelstorm
Epic: Green Tide

Lets not start this again.....LOL ::)

Epic: Titans
Author:  wargame_insomniac [ Mon Sep 19, 2011 8:26 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Adeptus Mechanicus vs Orks supplement story preview
Angel_of_Caliban wrote:
wargame_insomniac wrote:
Mega Dreadnaughts??

http://www.forgeworld.co.uk/Warhammer-40000/ORK-MEGA-DREAD.html

Mega Dreadnought............ ;D

Thanks
Author:  wargame_insomniac [ Mon Sep 19, 2011 8:45 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Adeptus Mechanicus vs Orks supplement story preview
Hi

It says that they emabrked 25 Titans. Yet only 24 are listed:
1 Emperor Titan
7 Warlord Titans
6 Reaver Titans
10 Warhound Titans

Thanks

James
Author:  Evil and Chaos [ Mon Sep 19, 2011 8:59 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Adeptus Mechanicus vs Orks supplement story preview
Thanks for the catches, and more extensive PM's too. Thanks guys.

Titles are definitely welcome. :-)
Author:  wargame_insomniac [ Mon Sep 19, 2011 9:00 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Adeptus Mechanicus vs Orks supplement story preview
On a BFG point- I think you need to upgrade the Imperial reinforcement fleet. They would need a more imposing presence of say a battleship and a cruiser to make 3 Ork Kroozas just turn and run.
Author:  ceimeifukan [ Mon Sep 19, 2011 9:24 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Adeptus Mechanicus vs Orks supplement story preview
Evil and Chaos wrote:
Hey All,

I'm done with my break from the forum, and I'm returning with a few fruits of labour...


Great to hear you're back. Will have a read through tomorrow
Author:  CaptainSenioris [ Mon Sep 19, 2011 9:39 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Adeptus Mechanicus vs Orks supplement story preview
I'll have some time to kill this week, will also have a read through.

Title wise I think "Epic: Machine War" has a nice ring to it.
Author:  wargame_insomniac [ Mon Sep 19, 2011 10:40 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Adeptus Mechanicus vs Orks supplement story preview
Hi Ben- I liked the first chunk of story. Can't wait to see the closing picture of Imperial retreat.

From an army list point of view, what determined the choice of army lists to be included?

Is the Legio Destructor list the same as the War Griffons list in v3.19?

Thanks

James
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