awesome background, some of the bits look like: back of an insect, some sort of sea shell, earth worm/caterpillar (possibly caterpillar with earth worm texture?!), head of some sort of louse and/or crab maybe, some sort of beetle's pincers, and i don't want to try and guess what the fleshy red things on the sides are 0.o
First line indent, use consistently, should not be used for first para under a new heading, eg p3 vs p4. p6 you have 2 consecutive paras without an indent, affects whole text atm, just looks messy currently.
Imo the indent is too big, but same in other books anyway so meh.
Something i notice in this book particularly but may apply to others, use of 'two' vs 2 etc. You use numeric figures almost always, in this book at least some should be words, eg p7 'successful in regenerating
2 of those wounds'. Bit awkward because often it is a 'points' type thing for a specific numeric variable, but some in this book should def be words when in continuous text.
If vs is a contraction of versus there probably should not be a . after it, there should be no full stop for contractions, full stop only used for abbreviations. Probably applies to other books.
p1 the 'you know what', 'you know where'
p6 you're using * where it should be × (note: needs to be × not x)
p9 lictor image text wrap is fubar
p9 'least a -1 To-Hit' -1 needs to be a minus sign not a hyphen
p14 text breaking
very strangely across column
p16 top 2nd column, widowed line
p16 'with a -4 TSM or' use minus symbol not hyphen
p17 weapons summary table, minus singes needed. Same table, inconsistent use of full stops at end of Notes entries
p18 en dashes needed many places
p19 as above
p24 minus singes needed not hyphens
p25 minus singes needed not hyphens
