Good to see that things are moving again with the SoB!
Interesting to see the direction you're taking it. I thought that the epic Uk list was underpowered, which given the results of into the breach, shows that I just need to get better at playing with my sisters

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Comments on the direction:
Great to see big churches, and marauders and redemptionists in the same list again. It seems that 4 dominions @ 200 are much better than 6 retributorsaretributors@ 250, i'd rather see a change in the points rather than a change to retributor loadout.
Comments on specific units:
Really glad to see emperor's chapel and cathedral of purification in the list. How are people using these? I don't get much out of mine. Could the chaes have 20cm move like the cathedral? Also what units can they transport? (I'd love to have penitent engines in them) for the emperor's chapel maybe they need an exemption to the normal transport rules so that they can carry a formation between the two of them.
Sisters repentia it seems they have not been brought back to the epic uk version as they have extra attack MW rather than just MW on their normal cc attack. This makes them much better than arcoflagellants for the same price.
Living saint shouldn't she have move 30cm and jump pack?
Comments on formatting of pdf 2.01
Title page says version 1.3
How to use army list has examples that are not consistent with current army list.
Something seems to be missing/not right in the Marauder's weapons section. (Three weapon names but four lines of weapon stats)
Looking forward to getting more games in with the new list!