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Author:  Xavi [ Mon Apr 19, 2004 9:32 pm ]
Post subject:  Black Griffons

Hi there!

Well, I have cleansed my hard disk with a flammer and a thunderhammer and recovered the history of my marine chapter. After a first glance it looks like it still requires massive work to finnish, but I think I will retake it.

As such my idea is to post the diverse parts of the fluff one after the other, at a scheduled time of 1 part per week, except for the first week, wehre you willl get 2 parts ;)

Hopefully this will give me an incentive to keep up with the shcedule of edition and writing!!

Cheers,

Xavi

Author:  Xavi [ Mon Apr 19, 2004 9:33 pm ]
Post subject:  Black Griffons

CHAPTER BACKGROUND

I. Glory Days

The chapter was created in the XXVIth in 738.M41 founding after some vessels reported a strong Eldar presence in the Farid System, a system that was nominally under the control of the Imperium, even if effective control had never been established there. The plans to colonise it had been pendant for at least 3 millennia so far and only one of the planets was inhabited, even if their development level was that of bronze age. The Eldar movements detected in the system made the High Lords of Terra decide to deploy a Space Marine chapter in the system to control those movements and confirm the domain over the system. So, during the XXVIth founding a chapter was decided to be located into the Farid system to take care of the Eldar menace.

Hence, the Fire Griffons were created and 50 years after the first zygotes were prepared the chapter was successfully deployed in Farid VII. The planet had undergone huge improvements in their facilities under the direction of the Adeptus Mechanicus during that period, even if the inhabitants were still in a crude technology and social age to create tensions and enhance the battle prowess of the population. This was explicitly encouraged by the terraformers and socioformers of the Imperium since they were supposed to be the future recruitment base for the new chapter.

Even if there had been Eldar sightings during those years, no permanent Eldar presence had been detected in the system but for some stones in either of the extreme planets of the system. Superstitious as the imperials are, and given their similarity to the Cadian Monoliths the Adeptus Mecanicus had refused to remove or investigate them in depth, specially after a titan guarding the first expedition appeared destroyed one morning. No one had heard anything during the night. After the chapter was deployed in Farid VII the Adeptus Mechanicus left the system to its new rulers.

The chapter was created using the Crimson Fists geneseed and was a stable one. During the tests they performed excellently and they were specially trained in starship and rapid deployment combat since they were to control a system more than anything and counter the Eldar menace, which excelled in its high mobility operations. Given their primary duty, the fleet of the chapter was quite big for a space marine chapter, and included 4 battle barges and 10 cruisers, apart from a plenty of escort vessels and recon ships. An Imperial Navy task force was supposed to have a presence in the system as well eventually but the time for their deployment was uncertain at the time. Soon the sky around Farid VII became nearly a naval station with a large shipyard in its own right and the natives became reverent to their new masters, that had brought stars in the sky for them with their arrival.

Everything went well for 2 years, with no Eldar presence detected in the system. Even better, a large promethium source was detected in Farid VI and the marines were obviously assigned the task to protect it as well while the Adeptus Mechanicus prepared the equipment and human resources to exploit it. The deployment of the Imperial Navy task force was speeded up, meaning that only 7 more years would pass before the task force was deployed. During this period the navy of the new chapter reached the full strength that the Lords of Terra wanted to give it and their missions in a sector with a high rate of piracy were remarkable. Of special mention were the Hunter Squadrons of the chapter, that depleted more than one pirate force way larger than them in weaponry and size due to some inventions of the Techmarines of the chapter, including improved boarding and fusion torpedoes. The chapter also engaged itself in a campaign to destroy several ork kingdoms in nearby systems and used that as battle practice for the marines. Everything seemed designed to announce a future of glory for the chapter in the service of the Emperor.


II. Doomsday

Then, in one day it all changed. The truth is that the system was a webway middle step for the eldar. The large stones in each extreme of the system were in fact webway portal links. The system was a real space step between 2 large webway portals created during the golden age of the Eldar. large enough to hold out a craftworld?s army. And this is exactly what appeared through one of the portals.

The Eldar already knew that the marines were there after a small cruiser of them was intercepted by the marines half a year ago and the runes telling the farseers about the danger of having a long time secure route blocked by mon keighs. The eldar had some dire needs to permit that interruption in their communications network so they assembled their forces and appeared in the system prepared to destroy the invaders of their webway jump point.

The marines readied their fleet, and a large confrontation began. The battle raged for a day, even if the Eldar had assembled a clearly superior fleet, both in manpower (elfpower) and vessels, basically due to the fact that the marines were at the same time fighting for their lives, protecting their home system and performing the duty they had been primarily assigned to perform, strengthening their resolve beyond any known limits before. But the Eldar were clearly winning the day. Finally an Eldar Solaris light cruiser squadron broke the Marine line and blew out the promethium-rich planet of Farid VI to pieces. The deflagration whipped out most of the Space Marine fleet that was still in reserve, including their flagship battle barge, the Light Bringer, and Chapter Master Raphael with it. The explosion also destroyed Farid VII, taking out a huge chunk of the planet and making the world change its orbit as well as destroying its biosphere. After that perfectly timed blow the Eldar annihilated the rest of the marine fleet that was left in disarray after the hecatomb and left the scene, leaving only devastation and death to demonstrate they had been there. A marine chapter had all but been whipped out from their path, obliterated by Asuryan?s Wrath in less than 20 hours.

Author:  Guardian [ Fri Apr 23, 2004 9:35 pm ]
Post subject:  Black Griffons

Impressive fluff Xavi can'twait for the next one   :)

Author:  Xavi [ Wed Apr 28, 2004 2:48 pm ]
Post subject:  Black Griffons

III. The Dannomel Survivors

Not all the marines were at their home world when the battle started, though. The 4th and 5th companies, as well as some elements of the 10th company had been fighting in the nearby Dannomel system against the Ork Warlord Kargarr and were unaffected by the devastation unleashed by the Eldar. When the notice of the attack reached them they embarked in their 2 strike cruisers, the Purification Spear and the Fury and sprinted to their home system. When they arrived, they only found devastation and the rests of their chapter and home world. Some patrol squadrons, mostly assigned to other companies also joined them there as they had been far away patrolling in search of pirates or in recon missions around nearby sectors. Of special notice was the presence of Master Techmarine Huron among them; he had been supervising the progress of a new space station in a nearby system and now was the only member of the chapter?s HQ to be alive. The small force headed for the Pler Hive World, since the remaining fleet had no long range astropaths to contact Imperial authorities and inform about the terrible events that just happened. They didn?t expect but chapter dissolution after the utter failure of all their Chapter Sacred Missions but they accepted it valiantly none the less. Only 211 marines remained of the original chapter.

In the meantime, Captain Janus of the 4th Company became the temporary leader of the remains of the chapter after a general vote of the brothers since Huron decided to leave the position for an other brother marine. Janus had distinguished himself in combat against the Orks in Dannomel and had a great battlefield tactical skill. The Fleet Master role was given to Brother Valorus, leader of the Purification Spear Strike Cruiser, that had developed a series of innovative tactics during the previous years in the pirate hunting strategies used by the fleet to wipe them out. The chapter also decided as a whole to change their armour colour from Light blue and grey to black as a sign of penitence and remorse and changed their name to Black Griffons, showing their new colours as a reminder that they needed to purify themselves after failing in a sacred mission.

Author:  Xavi [ Sat May 08, 2004 5:30 pm ]
Post subject:  Black Griffons

Hello again,

Since I failed to put up the story last monday I am puting up 2 part of the story now. Enjoy! :)

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IV. The Battle of Pler; The Emperor?s Glory revealed

When the small force reached Pler they found why their campaign in Dannomel was going so well. An ork blockade was laid on the planet and the astropaths informed about them being unable to penetrate an Ork psychic barrier around the planet; the Ork warboss Kargarr was attacking the planet.

Seeing a way to purify themselves from their past failures the marines readied their small fleet for combat and attacked the enemy capital ship. Actually, given the entrance point in orbit of the marines, it was the first vessel they encountered on their path; a huge ork hulk. The assault went very well, and soon the marines were boarding the ork vessel while some hunters and novas were taking care of the incoming ork vessels that were coming to help their hulk flagship.

The risky manoeuvre of the marines ended up going well, and several of the assault teams reached important parts of the ork construction in few minutes, cutting down its defences and allowing the strike cruisers to start a systematic bombardment of the vessel. In the meantime the assault group Death Harvesters, lead by Chaplain Ignitus of the 5th Company (so named because his favourite method to cleanse the heretics was to use a flamer) reached the space hulk?s ?command? centre where they found a huge ork and his bodyguards: Warboss Kargarr himself.

The two groups engaged in a terrible battle for several minutes but the numeric superiority of the orks started to take its toll on the marines. But then, Chaplain Ignitus saw what he thought was not possible: the space hulk were they were fighting was in fact an imperial vessel and there was a huge image of the Emperor in the ceiling, even if partially ripped out with holes from the orks, that would have been having fun shooting at it. Chaplain Ignitus thought at least it was a good place to die fighting, under the eyes of the Almighty Emperor of mankind. That way he would be able to judge them all more easily and decide their fate in all his glory. He was thinking in that way and smiling at the thought when something weird happened and he felt stronger, bigger and more powerful. In fact for the fist time he saw the 3 metre ork general as if he was no more than a child by his side. The face of the Emperor was watching at him, smiling.

Ignitus stopped the slash Kargarr was directing to his throat, dodged his power claw and with a mighty blow of his sacred Croxius Arcanum broke the skull of the ork warboss. The crack echoed all around the room and the combats ended to watch what had happened. Looking at the scene of the black marine with a skull faced helmet, shining with a weird red light over the corpse of their warboss that had a splintered skull was too much for most of the orks and they fled the scene. Those that remained to fight were cut down by the marines that unleashed a storm of fire and bolter bullets on them.

In the meantime, outside the space hulk the marines saw how the enemy vessels were starting to drift, and how some of them had collided unexpectedly, as if they had lost their course. Communication with the assault teams informed about the incredible success of the raid and about the unexpected finding. Fleet commander Valorus ordered the strike cruisers to start to fire against certain parts of the space hulk, opening huge gaps in what looked like a solid structure and revealing the profile of what seemed to be an old battleship laying inside the packed space rubbish. They tried not to hit it with the salvos to preserve its structure as intact as possible, but that left the marines more work to do on board since the ship had to be cleansed in close quarters.  

The piercing of the ork waagh catalyser caused an other good effect apart from disorganizing the ork fleet: it made the psychic shield generated by the ork waagh energy to thin down and so the planet astropath?s could send out messages being for help. Due to the temporal lack of initiative among the orks and some feuds starting among the remaining leaders to see who would be Kargarr?s successor, the orks started to fight among themselves and were less aggressive against the imperial forces, giving the marines and planetary defence forces a time of relief. In a 4 week time the ground forces of marines and Imperial guard, helped by some reinforcements from the Alga system. Dispersed or destroyed the remaining orks in the sector. Most of them returned to the Dannomel system and it remained an ork stronghold, while others were destroyed by the imperial navy and guard.

Author:  Xavi [ Sat May 08, 2004 5:34 pm ]
Post subject:  Black Griffons

V. Days of pain, days of rebirth

The success at freeing the hive world of Pler made the Lords of Terra not better disposed towards the remaining of a chapter that had utterly failed in its main missions, but prevented them from disbanding the chapter ipso facto. They were allowed to survive, but at the price of doing so on their own since no resources were to be provided to them in the following 50 years from those controlled by the Imperium. Considering ammunition, tanks and other facilities (apart from food and manpower) are basically produced in Empire worlds, that was more or less the same as a long decadence until they would die definitively. None the less, they should answer the calls for help of Imperial authorities as if they were a fully supported chapter. Additionally, an inquisitor was about to be sent to ensure that they performed following the directives set in the punishment sentence. The message said tat their special conditions would be considered, but such a statement was something that not even the most stupid ork would believe. However, no matter how complicated the situation was presented for the chapter in the medium term, the command of the chapter had things that required their dire attention more than the astropathic message they had just received at the time.

The cleanse of the orks inside the empire battle ship proved troublesome. It had to be done at close range, and it proved quite risky in areas like the plasma reactors. A large number of marines got hurt and the lack of Terminator armour proved to be a serious hindrance in some areas. Luckily most of the war equipment of the orks had already been disembarked and the most fearsome weapons were not aboard for the orks to use against the Adeptus Astartes. But orks do not need high tech to blast something apart?

In one of the areas, Ignitus, the hero of the Emperor?s chapel and his squad found a group of orks that were looking at them with eyes injected in blood and a wicked smile. That was not that weird, but the strips of plasma grenades that some gretchins were carrying, were. Three of the orks threw the gretchins towards the marines and then the greenskins opened fire with fusion guns and flamers against them creating a huge deflagration of plasma that killed a large part of the squad and mortally wounded Chaplain Ignitus. The detonation alerted nearby squads that soon were in the scene and took care of the orks swiftly, but the devastation caused among the Death Harvesters had been great. Ignitus and some of his fellows were rapidly brought to the Apothecarion of the Purification Spear, but life was leaving the chaplain fast. Only one thing could be made.

An empty Dreadnought sarcophagus had been assigned to each company by Chapter Master Raphael a year after the  chapter was formed. It was supposed to hold a great hero of each company, so all of them could, in the future, have a living link with their past. None of the companies had yet used it and it was decided that Ignitus would be the first dreadnought of the 5th battle Company. The operation was difficult for the apothecaries, though. They had not the full resources of a fortress monastery to aid them in the operation of entombment and the chaplain was more than once only kept from dying definitively during the process by its own strength of will. In the end the operation was successfully fulfilled, though, and the chaplain became the first dreadnought of the depleted chapter.

The cleanse ended 4 weeks after it started with the final result of 27 dead marines and 62 with wounds worth consideration. That reduced the effective number of marines to 184. Low for any direct battle mission.


Next chapter: "the Gloria Imperialis" Coming soon....

Author:  Xavi [ Sat May 15, 2004 4:22 pm ]
Post subject:  Black Griffons

VI. The Gloria Imperialis

A thing that had escaped the Lords of Terra attention when they declared the chapter to be ostracised from the Empire for 20 years (basically because the new Chapter Master, Janus had not told them) was the fact that the space hulk that they were cleansing was a Despoiler class battleship of old. Further cleansing of detritus had proven that and unveiled the fact that the ship was seriously damaged but not beyond repair. It had not, however escaped the attention of the Space Marines, and neither the attention of both the Governor or Pler and the Imperial Navy commander from Alga, Mariscal Darmek. Both were willing to get a grasp on the powerful battleship, and they started to manoeuvre around Janus to win a new flagship for their systems. At the time the battleship was under marine control and in fact it belonged to them by right of conquest but they assumed that a disgraced chapter could easily consider offering it to the local authorities in order to win allies in their times of distress.
 
Janus did indeed listen to their demands and praise with an attentive ear and once the ship was completely cleansed from any ork infestation he allowed the ship to be escorted to Maze, the Pler subsector navy shipyards since even if they were relatively small the warp drives of the battleship were in a precarious state and no one wanted the ship to be lost again in the warp for millennia. That heavily annoyed the Alga Navy Admiral given that Janus had not reported that the ship would be transferred to the more important navy shipyard once the warp drives would be fixed but he could do nothing to prevent it. The governor of Pler was more than happy with the movement thinking about the political implications of such a move, something that Janus was perfectly aware of.

The ship was renamed Gloria Imperialis, since no records were found for it in the Machine Spirits on board. The marines insisted upon that name as they thought it fitted well the vessel after the battle in the ship?s chapel and the Governor of Pler had no objection about it. Most systems were still operative, even if the mighty behemoth was estimated to had been in the warp during at least 7 millennia . Those systems that weren?t operative were repaired or substituted by new and improved ones. Under the direction of the Adeptus Mechanicus of the system and some more staff of the organization of the Machine Cult, and the Chapter?s remaining techmarines the vessel undergone a series of massive changes and upgrades to restore it to full efficiency and battle prowess. From salvaged wrecks that they towed from the Farid system the marines directed the artisans and technicians in giving the Despoiler some equipment that had never been seen in a regular imperial Navy vessel. The completely ruined dorsal lances were removed and substituted for a powerful bombardment cannon, even if less massive than that of a regular battle barge; the prow got its launch bays adapted to carry more modern spacecraft, including thunderhawks and most systems were automated as well, meaning that a much smaller crew would be needed to operate the Gloria Imperialis. The hull was also reinforced ?to improve this great flagship that had returned to the hands of mankind for the future Glory of the Emperor?. The ideas and technical help provided by Techmarine Huron proved instrumental in those improvements and modifications. The Governor of Pler carried a broad smile around every time he visited the docks and had dreams of glory and fame when he thought about the new addition he was going to give to the sector?s High Command. He and his system would surely be promoted after that gift to the Navy.


Next chapter: Unexpected allies?

Author:  Xavi [ Mon May 17, 2004 11:26 pm ]
Post subject:  Black Griffons

Hi!

I see a 67 in number of visits (several, maybe 15-20 being mine to post stuff and correct typos) but is somebody reading it or you only skim around...? After Guardian's comment (greatly appreciated) I have seen no opinions nor suggestions. Is so good that you don't know how to improve it? :;): (lol, jk) or is there an other factor?

I would like as much feedback as I can. I am sure I am breaking some fluff rules, so there must be something you can throw at my face like et tissue balls ;) Come on people :p lol

Regards,

Xavi

Author:  Mojarn Piett [ Tue May 18, 2004 7:27 am ]
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I have read the entire thing but have not found anything to nitpick . Impressive work on the background; it's as long as my Exodite fluff but you've done it in much less time.  :o  :cool:

Summa summarum: I don't have any ideas to improve it.

Author:  Justiniel [ Tue May 18, 2004 9:16 am ]
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Apart from the occasional typo I am enjoying the story. I know relatively little about the general fluff so am unable to comment on tha aspect either. Is it a stand alone 'history' or is it going to develop into a story? I'm reading it as 'history' at the moment and with that in mind it's good (tho' informal as far as regular history books go, yeahh)

Author:  Athmos [ Tue May 18, 2004 9:42 am ]
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Well, i quite enjoy reading this a bit like a novel, i find it quite enjoying to read, i must confess it didn't cross my mind to tell so :)

I usually don't speak to books, even good ones :)
I suppose you could take this as a compliment : it mean i was took by the story, and forgot somewhat i was boring at work and reading on a Forum :)

Athmos

Author:  Xavi [ Wed May 19, 2004 12:58 pm ]
Post subject:  Black Griffons

I see. Good to know I am not writing for thin air :cool: I still want to hear any suggestions or inconsistencies you find. The style is a little bit odd, since most of it so far was writen a year ago or so, so yes, there are quite some odd expressions around. I suppose that in the future people will have more comments, starting with next's week upload (inquisition stuff et al) but well, as I said good to know :) Thx for the kind comments. Sometimes one needs some morale boost in those issues.

Regards,

Xavi

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