Evil and Chaos wrote:
Maybe if it were more quadrapedal?
Like, beefier front limbs?
Oh, and a dew claw, for some "evolution gone wrong" emphasis?
I'm sure he will add more muscle definition once the broad strokes are locked down.
I dunno if we're quite on the same wavelength, but I was thinking less definition, in a way. To clarify my last post, it's got large, flat, basic carapace plates (necessarily, for something that'll be just taller than a 6mm human?) and a lot of subtle 'ripples' on the fleshy parts. I'd prefer it all smoothed over a bit, meself.
But, fair enough if it's only a WIP, and early days. Though I'm booted into hypercritic mode to say that I'm not feeling the broad strokes either, at this point. The typical Grandma Wendy... 'life eater' look with a big gun on the back didn't fly with other posters here, but I don't know if falling back on the faction's general look is doing it many favours either. The long, gradient, row of plates along a relatively streamlined body with a long, tapering tail, kind of look. Especially squeezed into an almost-scorpion pose and with a big plasma-bug blaster-bulb awkwardly balanced on the end of the tapering tail.
And thinking about rippled flesh, streamlining, and plates, something's clicked. I think it suffers from something that some fantasy dragon designs suffer from, that I've noticed: It's got a fairly formless body (if I'm being ungenerous: a sock) with some legs glued on the sides and a row of roof tiles glued on the back. No real ribcage or pelvis (or thorax or abdomen) for the limbs and parts to anchor to. In my experience, I don't think adding more superficial detail to the surface will improve or disguise the general structure.
Sorry if I'm coming across too harsh, but I'm not much into the 'if you can't say anything nice say nothing' attitude - with regards to miniature design anyway - and I feel I have to speak up, especially if it's being shown off for commentary before production, rather than a personal hobby project or even something for the mild applause of TacComm members. I'd like to buy 6mm bugs to proxy one of Wendy's armies, but I'd want them to be something I'd like to buy anyway.