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Epic : Siege
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 20, 2010 3:42 pm 
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Also, what did you make the original file in?

MS Publisher.

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 21, 2010 7:15 pm 
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p8  in sub headings your using hyphens, after this your using en dashes in the same way in headings of same heirachy (they all need to be en dashes, or possibly ems given your heavy use em them else where).

p12, fluff 'God-given' near end, not sure about the fluff here, while the emperor is worshiped is he referred to by imperials just as 'God'?

p14,15 captioned mentioned before, also just noticed the font is different from that used on p16+

unit data tables notes sections: make use of full stop consistent. The printed epic book itself is inconsistent (eg it has Reinforced Armor with and without a full stop in notes, for example in your .pdf see :
p23 'Supreme Commander.'  vs
p40 'Supreme Commander'   choose a method and make it consistent.

Note: im not checking spelling or grammar as im awful at both, haven't 'read' the doc, these have just been things that jump out.




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 Post subject: Re: Epic : Siege
PostPosted: Fri Apr 02, 2010 1:30 pm 
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Okay, now I can finally access this again.

Get any last-minute thoughts in quickly!
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 Post subject: Re: Epic : Siege
PostPosted: Fri Apr 02, 2010 1:32 pm 
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Okay, you guys have a day or two to get in any last-minute thoughts!
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 Post subject: Re: Epic : Siege
PostPosted: Sat Apr 03, 2010 9:06 am 
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30cm was pretty crap however...

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 03, 2010 9:49 am 
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Hena wrote:
Stormblade and 45cm range. Should it be 30cm as the 3BP with disrupt in a company of three is whole lot of BMs to any target?


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 Post subject: Re: Epic : Siege
PostPosted: Sat Apr 03, 2010 10:40 am 
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He does.

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 Post subject: Re: Epic : Siege
PostPosted: Sat Apr 03, 2010 11:31 am 
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It's still not as good as a Decimator, either in primary or especially secondary weapons (or in having CC4+ and universally fearless)... at 30cm range on the main gun it was simply completely rubbish.

That 75cm range you're talking about demands a double move, which means you're hitting on 5's and 6's, hardly the most threatening weapon in the game.

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 Post subject: Re: Epic : Siege
PostPosted: Sat Apr 03, 2010 11:48 am 
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I understand where you're coming from Hena, but in my extensive experience the 30cm version was very inferior.

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 03, 2010 12:26 pm 
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Well with 45cm it's too good.

Hmmm.

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So how about removing IC and Disrupt?

No. The weapon is extremely powerful.

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