Hey All,

I'm done with my break from the forum, and I'm returning with a few fruits of labour...

For starters, anyone who wants to help me out with the proof reading of the story segment of the still-unnamed Adeptus Mechanicus vs Orks supplement can now download the first chunk of the story attached below.

Please PM me any feedback, especially as related to typos etc, although critiques of the story itself are of course also welcome.

Bear in mind it is intended to be read as a two page spread, ala how a real printed book would be read.

Please note that all graphics & artwork currently included are temporary placeholders, I hope to replace them with better pictures, maps, etc, further down the line.

Anybody who would like to contribute Artwork, or Writing to the project, please also PM me.

Thanks,

- E&C

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will have a skim through over lunch, my en-dash sense is tingling

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Hi Ben- have dowloaded and will have a full read through.

One quick question- can you lighten the brown on planetary survey page. maybe my eyes are tired but I'm finidibg it hard to read on screen. Also I reckon it will be wuite dark when you print off.

Thanks

James

Mega Dreadnaughts??

For the titl.e:
Epic: Godmachines
Epic: Storm of Steel
Epic: Steelstorm
Epic: Green Tide

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Thanks

Hi

It says that they emabrked 25 Titans. Yet only 24 are listed:
1 Emperor Titan
7 Warlord Titans
6 Reaver Titans
10 Warhound Titans

Thanks

James

Thanks for the catches, and more extensive PM's too. Thanks guys.

Titles are definitely welcome. :-)

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On a BFG point- I think you need to upgrade the Imperial reinforcement fleet. They would need a more imposing presence of say a battleship and a cruiser to make 3 Ork Kroozas just turn and run.

Great to hear you're back. Will have a read through tomorrow

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I'll have some time to kill this week, will also have a read through.

Title wise I think "Epic: Machine War" has a nice ring to it.

Hi Ben- I liked the first chunk of story. Can't wait to see the closing picture of Imperial retreat.

From an army list point of view, what determined the choice of army lists to be included?

Is the Legio Destructor list the same as the War Griffons list in v3.19?

Thanks

James